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valerierose



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PostPosted: Thu Jun 16, 2005 10:59 am    Post subject: random thoughts Reply with quote

I will read ashes for you, if you ask me.
I will look in the fire and tell you from the gray lashes
And out of the red and black tongues and stripes,
I will tell you how fire comes
And how fire runs as far as the sea.


--Carl Sandburg, Fire Pages
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valerierose



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PostPosted: Thu Jun 16, 2005 12:21 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

the way you ignore me
stabs
the way you treat me differntly
cuts
the way i know you think of me
buries me alive


and i'll never be able to be that woman
because to you
i am just a little girl
who pretends
to be an adult
and i prance around
possibly adored
but never believed
NEVER taken seriously

and if there is so much in my life that I am over
what else do I have left?
what do you do when your desire and motivation has been sucked out of you?
what do you say
when he asks you
what is your plan - what do you want to be.
yet i can't tell him
that whatever I'm doing now means nothing til.................
i will bite my tongue until it bleeds.


it's funny
how people will assume that you
in your young age
have so much in front of you
still

and you better fucking believe that I know you know how I feel.
nothing ever needs to be spoken
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valerierose



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PostPosted: Thu Jun 16, 2005 1:35 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

what the fuck is wrong with me
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walterBeOne



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PostPosted: Thu Jun 16, 2005 2:01 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

what the hell are you saying...there is nothing wrong with you ... you are the bright and shining star that will never fade.

by the way, you said previously you would never write anything from yourself on this board, but today I see you everywhere...thanks for leaving a little of yourself on the board...you can write... let it go

"In-between the tears I can see clearly and know I am not alone..."

and I disagree with you, for everything needs to be spoken...communication is everything..
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freefall



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PostPosted: Thu Jun 16, 2005 5:47 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Absolutely Walter. We all need to express ourselves at some point or another, be it using our own words, or words from others that reflect our state of mind. There's absolutely nothing wrong with you Val. And it's much better than keeping it all down to yourself, because it can get really heavy.
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