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mikegray
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PostPosted: Wed Apr 13, 2005 3:31 pm    Post subject: Word Tree from Charlotte Reply with quote

april 2005...word tree by char

young lusts
vitamin addictions
hermit support hotline
1 800 order in
sweat
blows in the wind
that is making a mess
of my closet.

dream sequences
of
losing puppies i didn't buy
and breeding
too many thoughts
about the birthing
processes of
every little thing
that has mattered to
me
they
matter
differently
at
different
times
for
the sake
of
rarity
and the
memory
however ugly
turns into a
glowing
beauty.
a
knowing.


*******please encourage artists, fans, writers, thinkers... to add on
to the tree.

love
char
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PostPosted: Wed Apr 13, 2005 5:13 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Power of
planing
knowing
doing
working
dreaming
caring
ignoring
saying no
saying yes
thinking
breeding
reproducing
multiplying
replying
ignoring
saying something
with silence
with words
power of.

Bringing to the table
what needs saying
what needs airing
what needs analyzing
what needs finalizing
what needs forgiving
bring this to the table
and eat well.

Not so simpleĖ
peace
war
freedom
bondage
love
hate.

Forgetting is easyĖ
when it hurts (us)
when it hurts (others)

Love is simple Ė
when you ignore your lover
when you hurt your lover
when you love your lover
when it is over
when it is beginning
not when it is .. being
and ongoing

good words
many good words
nice .. caring
helpful.. grateful
yes smoothing, edifying
yet maybe manipulating, calculating.

Bad words
bad, bad words
hateful, scroungful
vengeful, despairing
as rain off an umbrella
as a sponge with water

I am not too sure if these are word trees ... but it is my try at the process.

Walter
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PostPosted: Wed Apr 13, 2005 7:16 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

never posted one of these but i'm feeling good about giving it a whirl. here i go. Smile


savvy
without confidence
arrested development
am i
fear
of the insignificant
all in my head
i'm
trying
to let it go
just me
microsoft sucks
mac mini me, please
orange dream machine
french vanilla
from a machine
dreamless sleep
sleepless nites
comfortable
ramble
trust
honesty
safe
at ease
all wrapped up in friendship
say anything
let it be
maybe she'll have fun
or at least venture out
from the kitchen gods
when he comes home soon
it's all
a scattered jumble
racing in my head
but
i'm
still
me
changing slightly subtlely
but still
changing
for good
boldly snarking
where
no jules
has snarked before
the new
nyc
keep on walking
with 'me' music
in my ear
beats in my heart
keep moving
with a smile
and much love to all...


Smile
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PostPosted: Wed Apr 13, 2005 8:02 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

ms mar told me i must tell you all what her word tree reminded me of

i dreamt of my cat
the one i took in
my stray so sweet
always getting beat up
was sliced open with a
potato peeler.
he lived
he was hung
on an extension cord
running through the flap
of skin. he swung like
a hammock
he had a human like grin
but looked so in pain.
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PostPosted: Thu Apr 14, 2005 9:24 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

adding onto to char's tree----

Saw a homeless man begging for food
His foot crushed my spirit
for he refused me
He made me cry
I wanted to feed him
Belly & soul
Deflected but not defeated
Ripped box to pieces
I painted my own sign
I sat beside the homeless
In shining Lipgloss
my sign read only
GOODNESS
what is goodness?
Defined
Socrates
Knowledge of good is goodness
But then Heidegger
Lost in goodness
Embraced
Apartheid
People stop and stare at my sign
The outside deceives
Truth lies in essence
Love is a smoothing fire,
Love is a painful fire
A camera flashes in my eye
Spring isnít always sweet
peace floats from within
pieces float from without
little match girl
burning touches the depth
it hurts
As it hurts, it is purified.
The flame answers the yelling inside
How long the inside had been yelling.
In true perception all is given aid
Goodness?
Without true perception all is fainter than ever
Tears of regret burn,
Yet tears of love wash away the dirt of solidness
Music ebbs and flows
Ebbs
Did the whole engulf us
Eternity in essence
Where is goodness?
It is spilt Split on all
And by its splitting
It makes all one
So all soaks in grace
For even
Persephone
Sings by the light of Spring
Goodness lays
On the curb on 8th Avenue
as tears fill mu guitar

xoxoxoxo ruthie
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PostPosted: Sat Apr 16, 2005 7:03 pm    Post subject: falling Reply with quote

I falling now
down I go
from off this cliff again
one more time.. falling
a dream too often
waking up just in time
before I hit the bottom
morning saves the night
as light shines thru the shades

Yosemite .. day vision
negative flash thoughts
of me falling over the cliff
by the falls
two thousand feet down
into the valley of streams
blooming with flowers
weak rail keeping us safe
from the 2000 foot fall
but not keeping my mind from falling

there I go over the top
floating down to the bottom
memory flashing now
[to be cont.]
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PostPosted: Sat Apr 16, 2005 7:38 pm    Post subject: . Reply with quote

too many thoughts
the spinning continues
around.
around.
can you hear me?
I will find you.
there.
there.
darkness bleeds through
shadows in the corner
quiet.
quiet.
can I find you?
you will here me.
whisper.
whisper.
damp smell lingers
pressure surrounds innocence
tighter.
tighter.
are you listening now?
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PostPosted: Sun Apr 17, 2005 6:45 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

The thought is always there
if I had done it this way
would it have mattered
if I had said it that way
would it have mattered

a look your way
a thought your way
no clear path to you
your first impression
may give me a second
or send me away

The ones I pass by
in deep thought
not looking in their eyes
those passing maidens
slipping by .. never to return
gone into the abyss
of the turning clock
I may never know
the one who got away
we all are
ships passing in the night
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PostPosted: Sun Apr 17, 2005 10:00 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

to convince
a smile to cease
at last to see
a fickle
desperate
desire, for sure.

a matter of you
and this sand
to dream about your happiness
and to let it be, let it sink
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PostPosted: Thu Apr 21, 2005 10:25 am    Post subject: My Grand Reply with quote

[Inspired by Charlotteís live remarks last year about her male part (metaphorically speaking) being larger than theirs, directed to someone or ones in the audience, and the fact that Charlotte has wished she played a smaller instrument, so she can carry it around easier, yet at the same time she just bought a grand piano and put it in her living room.]

My Grand
my instrument is bigger and better than yours
and I like it that way
they say size doesnít matter
well, in my case it does
the smaller ones donít play as well
they donít last that long
they are not as thrilling
large ones give me chills
up and down my spine
smaller ones are blah and boring
just so so
but large, give me large
not just psychologically is large better
it is better
I love being around it in my living room
the feel, the look, yes the sound
you canít beat it
well some times I get carried away
and beat on it
but normally I just play on it

there is a problem though
small problem that it is
for the pleasure that it brings
the problem is
carrying it around
putting it in place
but when in place
oh, the results
give me large every time
give me my grand piano
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PostPosted: Thu Apr 21, 2005 12:22 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Walter,

That reminds me of a comment that Tori Amos made in 1994. A guy shock rocker had commented that his guitar was his phallic symbol. She laughed at him and said that she had a NINE foot phallic symbo and that he could never beat that--then she gave him that devilsh grin of hers. ha ha I love Tori and those flippant yet accurate comments. Very Happy


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PostPosted: Fri Apr 22, 2005 5:00 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Iím living in
yes, I know there is an outside
for me living inside
brings me my strength
around and around goes my thoughts
a life of their own
no one can take them from me
or reveal them if I say no
theyíre mine alone untilĖ
well, until I let them go
little acres of lakes, trees, and air
here, right here in my room
my domain
my home
my world
my cosmos
my empire

[there is a song called home on the range, but this is range in the home]
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 25, 2005 9:09 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

The birthing process

a new genesis
a new beginning
a new birth
a new life

from our genesis
comes more than can be previewed
one small step leads to dance
a dance on the stage of life
and the fight for life
Ė the joy of life
Ė the pain of life
Ė the love in life

one small thought begins Ė
small lines on paper
a paragraph of ideas
complete chapters of adventures
and ends in a book of life

one small kiss
births friendship and love
highs and lows
twists and turns
and with a kiss
passion may come
and with it Ė new life

the passion of Christ
gave new life to his church

the passion of lovers
may give new life to their joining

I pray this day
for new life for all
no book of life with an ending
no regrets, no still born
no tears, no dead
no ghosts, no, no
new life without fear
new life with strength
new life with you and you and you
together in a new heaven and earth

a new genesis
a new beginning
a new birth
a new life
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PostPosted: Tue Apr 26, 2005 7:01 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Living and the Dead

We walked among the dead today
their stones overturned and forgotten
broken beer bottles all about
little bits and pieces of their lives
written on their stone
tell us so little
about their adventure under the stars
they walked these streets
drank in the bars
worked in the factory
dug coal in the belly of the hill
gave birth to their young
and buried their own dead
now there're fogotten on a hill
overlooking a green tennis court
and an old coal town
but we felt their lives today
walking among their graves



pictures taken Apirl 26, 2005
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PostPosted: Fri Apr 29, 2005 2:12 pm    Post subject: Here I go again Reply with quote

itís simple Ė
let me tell you again
I love you.. I love you
more than...
more than words can utter
mere words talk in shades of gray
my love speaks in color
color that sings
if only you could hear my song

my love is directional
always facing you
always being
to you .. thru you
by you .. around you
on you .. near you
being everything
my love is.. for you

some see you
my love sees into you
and around you
I see what your eyes see
and what they canít see
I see you as you are
and what you were
and what you will be

some hear you
my love listens through you
I am your ears, your mind
I am all around you
your frequency is mine
I hear your words
in cells only meant for you
that only think of you

some walk near you
my love walks with you
nearer than near
feeling your very vibrations
your rushing blood
your beating heart
near .. not far

my love is Ė
xoxoxoxo
Ė itís simple and .. itís rare

[itís simple Ė yet when was the last time anyone was so loved, or so loved another]
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PostPosted: Sun May 01, 2005 1:42 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I do create
with this pencil
anything I choose
for whatever reason
as it moves me from within
as my memories play
as my mood permits
only a pencil
mere wood with lead
I do create

today, again
you, I draw you
this vision of you
keeps coming to mind
your face .. head slightly turned
facing down in thought
golden girl.. welcoming smile
when I look at you
I see your thoughts
be they the ones I project
be they what I wish
what I want.. yes, what I need
sure they be
for I created your image
in my mind
and placed you on paper
with this pencil
I do create

but if I were to walk in a room
and see you there
sitting
your face .. head slightly turned
facing down in thought
golden girl.. welcoming smile
would I see my dream
or would I see you
alive.. there before me
would I.. see you
as you are
and walk to you
or would I run and hide
do dreams come true
and if they do
will we know
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PostPosted: Sun May 01, 2005 1:47 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

so
lets continue
this clock of life
and
pretend
that we're
alone

when we all know
we're not
people roam
everyday
hiding
behind
walls
of
abortion clinics
screaming
to
mothers
brothers
friends
family
that they are sure
of what they're doing

and we know they're not

but i wake from a dream
of nightmares
combined
into a happy place
called home
and i
remember the
time
i
cried
in
the rain
with you on the phone
and
how you
told me
to
get out of your life

and i did
for you

so here's my goodbye
with a
public hand
my fist turned upright
and a finger boldy going
where no finger
has gone
before
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PostPosted: Sun May 01, 2005 3:29 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

[such a beautiful day here .. after a trip to buy vegetables at the local farmers' market .. what else is there to do but to write a few words .. a few thoughts.. especially since I need to do something, but I am procrastinating]

I didnít know
to look on you
how could I tell
you look so protected
how could any harm come your way
how could any...

my words frightened you
you could not take them
as they were meant
you gave them new meaning
not the meaning I intended
no harm for you were my words
or my thoughts
only kindness
gentleness
whispering for your soul

your reaction I could not foresee
the pain in your soul
I had no idea
to you .. I was
well I was just another
they come so often
you listen then chase them away
knowing their real intent
their real reasons

I jumped back
your reaction to my words
hurt .. yes it hurt
shocked .. I was shocked
how was I to know
who came before
who put knifes in your back
who forsaken you
who gave rocks in return for your diamonds
believe me .. I didnít know
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PostPosted: Mon May 02, 2005 4:54 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

succulent dionysis memories
lush in the valley of wine
WHINE
that's all you seem to do anymore
I shut you out
for th sake of my own
sanity
what is that anyway?
Drunk in your spirit
I'm sucked back in
grapes
hundreds of them
on the crush
crush them wsith my feet and
let the juice
trickle...
trickle
down like my faint heart
ebb and flow
of the ocean tide
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PostPosted: Thu Jun 16, 2005 7:28 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Is song her prayer

I heard her before
And when she sang
I felt her emotions
As never before
In song she had let me feel
What she feels

In my passion
I wanted more
Wanted so much more
Wishing to see all
To look into her soul
Hoping to see her empty out
Her red blood
Her inner secrets

In pursuit of my desire
Carefully I positioned myself
To look directly into her eyes
Not afraid to gaze
Daring her to look away
But little did I know
Her eyes are always closed in prayer
Never to open for me or anyone else
Her songs meant for the angels
We here only to witness
Her holy purpose
Her bonding with the cosmos

With her eyes tightly bonded
She was deep, buried in thought
Flash-thoughts of her secrets
Her hidden desires
Her forbidden pleasures
Given and taken

In song meant for the invisible
She sang into the high heavens
Never allowing me to see
What I came to see
Behind her tightly guarded eyes
Eyes, I wanted to open
To gently pull away her lids of silk
So I could see her nakedness
So I could gaze upon her soul

Walter, June 16, 2005
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PostPosted: Wed Jun 22, 2005 3:10 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Timing and Reality!

I came too late to the table
You were already eating your meal
And there was none left for me
They say timing is everything

I donít have any power
To stay your meal
If I could I would
But my limitations are real

And my impressions of you
They are real
Almost too real sometimes
Not a dream
Concrete

So what to do?
Shut down my mind
Cage in my thoughts
I canít

A substitute for you
None
A way around you
No way

I will bear this burden
As I have others
Not with a smile
But staring reality in its face

Damn reality!
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PostPosted: Fri Jun 24, 2005 8:35 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Too much syrup

When rain comes
Everything gets wet
It flows down to the sea
And back to the sky
The cycle is
Is like my love
A flowing cycle with no end

When you came my way
I wasnít protected
I had no shield in place
To protect me from you
No barrier to disallow your voice
No black shades to blur your beauty
Unprotected I stood
With no armor, no hope of escape
Captured, taken, yet not afraid
What is there to be afraid of?
You, not you

For you are
You are what my tired bones
Where waiting for
To heal them and embrace them
To cancel out all others
And replace them with you

My words too, too--
Well it is said now days
Donít be so sappy
Too much syrup ruins pancakes
Too much sugar bleeds ice tea
Well, so be it
Pour on the syrup
Extra sugar please
Sappy to the core

For you I am the sugar
The desert
The pie
The cake
The cookie
The whip cream

Better sappy
Than understated

[Walter June 24, 05]
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PostPosted: Mon Jun 27, 2005 9:33 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

[I am having a glass of wine and just remembered what one fine lady said to me, so of course a word tree of sorts comes forth...]

A Japanese Lover in a Small Town

You said I was what you always wanted
So quickly you said that
We hardly knew each other
We hardly kissed
And breathed each otherís breath

I am always shocked when someone
Someone as beautiful as you
Tells me that
I donít think of myself as special
To you or anyone else
To me
I am just me
To you I was someone you wanted
Maybe needed

But I was in a foreign land
Well, I was there to enjoy
To vacation
Not to make love
That would endure to the end of time
What can I tell you?
ďIím only passing throughĒ
What can I say to you?

Yes we spoke, and well
To each other
Words flowed
As if we really knew each other
From before, another life
Japanese was your first language
Mine being English
Yet we understood each other

You a confirmation that women
Yes those whose skin I enjoy
To touch, to look upon
Whose mind I love to look into
Enjoying their point of view
Yes, you
a confirmation
Women are women
In all lands
They want to be loved
And to love
They want their manís attention
His love, his devotion

I was devoted to you
While I was there
In that small town
While on vacation
But I had to leave
Can you forgive me?
Can you?
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 28, 2005 9:44 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

(i've never done a word tree before...let's give it a whirl...sort of going off of char's...and p.s. this is just on the spot, stream of conciousness stuff)

knowing
when its over
when its just begun
begun to try
make progress
but i digress
she's slipping again
try and strike a chord
but its too flat
there's no
gusto
to my playing
of the game
its a game
always just a game
to her
it never seems to work
her excuses
her abuses
abuses everyone but her
her
her
she
it now
will it work?
does it work?
i can't work
anymore?
than this
than that
the struggle
a constant tug-o-war
with authority
and respect
and circle arguments
logic that is meaningless
just some words to try to appease
a please
a plea
desperation for utopia
that will never
come
desperation for cooperation
for something that's
a remedy

sick and looking downward
everyday there is a struggle
with me
with her
with her
with him
with us
there's no
room at the inn
i cannot get in
her head and make a difference
but different strokes for
different folks
and i cannot foil her plan
no matter how destructive
self-destructive
both masochists
both sick
one from poison
one with disease
treat the beast
get a miserable belle
unhappy because its not
how it was
was is then
now is now
but now is lost
in a chardonnay fog
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PostPosted: Sat Jul 02, 2005 4:45 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

alicialutes,

That's pretty good, and the subject matter kind of reminds me of a friend of mine and what he is going through with his girl friend. He would relate to this:

Quote:
a constant tug-o-war
with authority
and respect
and circle arguments
logic that is meaningless


People who have preconceived scripts of what a good relationship is, are hard to live with. You need to flow with the people you are with. No one can live up to preconceived scripts. No one.
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